'I really don't know..' You sobbed, looking down.
'I'm going to leave this to you guys now..' Harry said, pushing you carefully in the apartment, and walking out. You and Zayn stood awkward, not saying anything. You started to walk into the kitchen. You got surprised.
'What happened?' You asked Zayn.
'I.. I got mad.. At myself.. For letting you go..' He said, trying to stop crying, but he couldn't. Several plates, glasses, etc. was smashed on the floor. You went into the livingroom, followed by Zayn. All the pillows was laying everywhere, and a picture of you two were laying on the floor, also destroyed.
'I don't wanna ride the rollercoaster that's life if you aren't on the ride, sitting right beside me..' He whispered, but you heard it.
'Don't say that, Zayn.. You can do so much better than me, and you know that' You said to him.
'Baby, don't say that. You are the best thing that have ever happened to me. It will take ages for me to coem over you, if i ever will get over you..' He said, sobbing again.
'I love you so much Zayn, but.. I think it's best if we just end it here..' You said, turning around so you faced him.
'Darling, don't do this to me..' He begged.
'I'm so sorry Zayn.. I'm so sorry' You said, starting to walk out the door.
'Andrea, honey.. Please, can i have one last kiss?' He asked you, taking your arm before you left the livingroom.
'Zayn, don't make this harder than it already is, i beg you Zayn..' You cried, he pulled you into him, brushing your head.
'Is it really over?' You could almost not hear what he was saying because he was sobbing. You nodded.
'Is this the last time i'm going to do hold you?' You haven't seen him crying this much before. You nodded again. You pulled back.
'I'm coming for my stuff tomorrow..' You said, looking down.
'I'm gonna miss you.. You will always be a part of me, you know that?' He cried, taking his hand up to your cheek, whiping your tears away with his thumb. You took his hand away. You turned around and walked out without saying a word. You opened the door.
'I'm going to miss you' He said.
'Bye, Zayn' You said, and with that you closed the door to the past.
Sad ending! :/
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It was very different, with the sad ending and all, but i LOVED IT, Mabey my favorite!
ReplyDeleteI loved this!! Can you make me one my name is Emily and if u make me one can it be with Harry
ReplyDeleteIt was really good but the ending was really sad
ReplyDeleteIt'so sad. I like it, but the thing i dont like is that it is sad. Sorry for being a bit cofusing.
ReplyDeleteLove it but sad ending
ReplyDeleteYou should make a part 3, where you go to pick up your stuff but he did something really romantic and won you over again?! Because its really sad!
ReplyDeleteI agree with a part 3!!(:
ReplyDeleteSooooo good! Please please please please please make a part 3 though I totally agree with these people!!=D
ReplyDeletePlease write a part 3? If you don't i might cry, it's just so sad! :'(
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing ya know?
i agree! u should make a part 3!!! i love when they end like that and then there is another part and then there is a happy ending! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! i love this one!
ReplyDeletePart 3 plzzzz
ReplyDeleteYESSS!!! A part 3 please!!!
ReplyDeleteYou should make a part three where they have a happy ending
ReplyDeletePlease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omgg yess pleaseee do a Part 3
ReplyDeletePart 3!
ReplyDeleteYay!sorry im the one who first suggested the part three and everyone is agreeing and i hope you do it! its so sad!
ReplyDeleteIf ur making part 3 make it happy please it was too sad for me :'( :-) .
ReplyDeleteDefs a part 3, it kinda ended like a cliffhanger atm never knowing if she'll come back or no,..
ReplyDeleteI agree we everyone Pleasee to a part 3
ReplyDeleteOMG thank you so much its soooo good.. but i agree you should do a part 3 :))xx
ReplyDeleteI'm crying if that was me I wouldn't do that
ReplyDeleteVery good!! It's very sad!! U should do a part 3!!
ReplyDeleteCan I have one please? My names Anna and i dont mind who its with, all of one direction are amazing
ReplyDeletecan you pleeeease make me one you make all the good ones my name is hailey and i dont mind wich boy it is
ReplyDeletePlease please PLEASE PLEASE do part three !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI Loved it!!! I hate how in most stories they are best friends she likes him and he likes her but they don't tell each other and then they make-out and become a couple in the end. This was soo unexpected and i just..it's just... AMAZAYN!!!
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